This is Just to Say
by William Carlos Williams & Leo
I have wasted the battery’s that were in the car and which you have just told me to get out of Forgive me, I was so eager to learn how things work.
Friday, 13 March 2020
This is Just to Say
I have wasted the battery’s that were in the car and which you have just told me to get out of Forgive me, I was so eager to learn how things work.
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Hello my name is Wairini and I’m a year 8 at Karoro School. I like the poem that you have written because it reminds me of the poem that I wrote on my blog. If you want to check it out, here is a link to my blog https://karorowairinii.blogspot.com/. I like how you changed the colour of the words you used to fill in the poem. Maybe next time you could make sure that your poem makes sense.
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thank you Wairini
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