We were told in Maniakalani to make an ad for something and I've done a Christmas one because its not far away!!! Please tell me what will make it better. its much appreciated.
Wednesday, 18 November 2020
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Leo, a great advert. you don't need too much in it to get the point across. Sometimes simple is best. A thought for next time is to put a logo of where I can get my 10 - 50% off. I like how all the colours of your writing are Christmas colours!
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