Wednesday, 1 September 2021

My 15 minute writing 3

 

Inspo from the song producer man - Lyn Lapid



The 17 year old  bowed and a loud cheer rose up from the crowd. She stood up and smiled, waving and walking off of the stage. This girl was an amazing dancer and had won many awards for her talent. She walked down the corridor, waving and congratulating the backstage crew. She smiled and grabbed her bag. When she walked out a man was waiting to see her. This man was the owner of one of the bigges money making businesses in the world.  And he wanted her to succeed in the world. She agreed to his contract and was flown out to LA. but the girl was to native to see he was only in it for the money. She went to a prestigious dance school and was worked to refine her skill. Life went on happily for a while (2 years) before she realised something was wrong. The contract said for 6 years she would work with the business man, but she didn’t want to any more. When she confronted him, he merrily laughed and said “ sweetie you gotta listen well it only matters how you sell”.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Leo, this is such great writing. Great Work!

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  2. hi leo this is really good writing nice good

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